From b186b7130313bccb6905e694b05e9d8f185a7050 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: =?UTF-8?q?Yann-A=C3=ABl=20Le=20Borgne?= Date: Thu, 29 Nov 2018 01:26:39 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] Fixed typos (#31) --- _develop/zero_to_dapp_1.md | 10 +++++----- _develop/zero_to_dapp_2.md | 12 ++++++------ _develop/zero_to_dapp_3.md | 14 +++++++------- _develop/zero_to_dapp_4.md | 2 +- _includes/create_id.md | 2 +- _includes/payout-appmining.md | 2 +- _includes/signature_fund.md | 2 +- 7 files changed, 22 insertions(+), 22 deletions(-) diff --git a/_develop/zero_to_dapp_1.md b/_develop/zero_to_dapp_1.md index 7e0bac0c..2bbe19c3 100644 --- a/_develop/zero_to_dapp_1.md +++ b/_develop/zero_to_dapp_1.md @@ -57,20 +57,20 @@ blockchain applications: Decentralized application - Users must create many username and password combinations for each service or application. Each combination must be managed and maintained. Also, each creation requires the user to provide, important or unique information into the care of a third-party. + Users must create many username and password combinations for each service or application. Each combination must be managed and maintained. Also, each creation requires the user to provide important or unique information into the care of a third-party. Users create and own one or more identities. They use their identities with all applications and services. For example, a user could use the same identity for buying books online as they use for social media. - Multiple third-party applications and services store personal data from individual users in backend servers.,These backend servers are under the control of the application or service. Users leaving the application leave their data behind. - Personal information and data is encrypted and remains under the control of the user.,Users leaving an application leave no data behind because none was stored with the application. + Multiple third-party applications and services store personal data from individual users in backend servers. These backend servers are under the control of the application or service. Users leaving the application leave their data behind. + Personal information and data is encrypted and remains under the control of the user. Users leaving an application leave no data behind because none was stored with the application. Multiple accounts across many servers make personal data subject to attack, misuse, and uncontrolled collection. - Users can audit access to their data and know who accessed their data and which date were accessed. + Users can audit access to their data and know who accessed their data and which data were accessed. Central authorities and middlemen control network access enabling them to censor applications and/or users that use them. - Companies are developing blockchains that run over peer-to-peer networks.,These future networks can make shutting down or entirely blocking a decentralized application is close to impossible. + Companies are developing blockchains that run over peer-to-peer networks. These future networks can make shutting down or entirely blocking a decentralized application close to impossible. diff --git a/_develop/zero_to_dapp_2.md b/_develop/zero_to_dapp_2.md index ae419e81..b64ced84 100644 --- a/_develop/zero_to_dapp_2.md +++ b/_develop/zero_to_dapp_2.md @@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ DApp development. This page has the following topics:
Can you skip this page?
-

If you are already have a good understanding of how DApps change user +

If you already have a good understanding of how DApps change user interactions, have a Blockstack ID, and have a good idea of the DApp you want to develop, skip this page and move onto 3 of 4 immediately.

@@ -104,11 +104,11 @@ Repeat this exercise with a friend or relative who is not a developer. This should give you perspective on the problems users will encounter with your potential application. -## Research existing decentralized applications +## Research existing in decentralized applications ![](https://d2mxuefqeaa7sj.cloudfront.net/s_65D38DE36A9E0559639DF0B6F5271AA88578C54592AF9D85F6A7C7F9A62C47D4_1537563661663_image.png) -This quote from Gene Luen Yang a Genius Grant recipient and comic book artist +This quote from Gene Luen Yang, a Genius Grant recipient and comic book artist, has a good point. Have you researched what other top industry thinkers have said about potential applications of blockchain technology? For example, EY developed a five-point test to help determine if a blockchain solution would help for a problem: @@ -127,7 +127,7 @@ test to help determine if a blockchain solution would help for a problem:

From Maslova, Natalia. "BLOCKCHAIN: DISRUPTION AND OPPORTUNITY." Strategic Finance, July 2018

-The EY test is a general test about the domains that blockchain application can disrupt. You can also consider more specific behaviors a DApp should mee. Blockstack defines three principles that Blockstack applications should meet: +The EY test is a general test about the domains that blockchain applications can disrupt. You can also consider more specific behaviors a DApp should meet. Blockstack defines three principles that Blockstack applications should meet: * Users own their own data * Users own their identities @@ -140,10 +140,10 @@ If you haven't read it, read the full article the Blockstack forum +* Visit the Blockstack forum. This is a valuable resource to learn about the questions that other developers have now or have had in the past. * Visit the Blockstack Community website to learn about events that may be coming to your area. -* Join the Blockstack Slack channel which you can join. +* Join the Blockstack Slack channel which you can join by filling in the following form. When coming up with ideas for an application, you can try some thought experiments. diff --git a/_develop/zero_to_dapp_3.md b/_develop/zero_to_dapp_3.md index 7f45088d..8f18bbaa 100644 --- a/_develop/zero_to_dapp_3.md +++ b/_develop/zero_to_dapp_3.md @@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ is an example of an identity. the ID. The magic recovery code is a string of characters Blockstack emailed to you when you created your identity. You can confirm your identity with either. -* If you do not yet have a Blockstack ID, create one through the Blockstack Browser . +* If you do not yet have a Blockstack ID, create one through the Blockstack Browser. Instructions for creating an ID are src - Vue.js code source code for the site.  This contains configuration files. + React source code for the site.  This contains configuration files. @@ -462,9 +462,9 @@ for the DApp. Data is encrypted at a unique URL on a GAI storage hub. ### Get and put user data to a GAIA Hub {:.no_toc} -GAI is the Blockstack data storage hub (https://hub.blockstack.org). Once a user +GAIA is the Blockstack data storage hub (https://hub.blockstack.org). Once a user authenticates, the application can get and put application data in the user's -storage. After a user signs in, the `SignedIn.js` code checks the user's GAI +storage. After a user signs in, the `SignedIn.js` code checks the user's GAIA profile by running the `loadMe()` method. ```js @@ -511,7 +511,7 @@ The Blockstack putFile() stores the data provided in the user's DApp data store. You can view the URL for the data store from a user's profile. If you tested your Animal Kingdom, you can see this on your profile. -To see your profile, go to the Blockstack explorer and search for your ID: +To see your profile, go to the Blockstack explorer and search for your ID: @@ -600,7 +600,7 @@ your keyboard. } ] ``` -7. Save and close the `contstant.js` file. +7. Save and close the `constant.js` file. 8. Back in a terminal window, restart your application. ```bash @@ -793,7 +793,7 @@ Before you begin, you need to build a site that is ready to deploy. {:.no_toc} At this point, your kingdom is isolated. If you know another kingdom, you can -add subjects from that kingdom but other kingdoms can access your subjects. In +add subjects from that kingdom but other kingdoms can't access your subjects. In this section, you use a free GitHub account to add your kingdom to the Blockstack kingdom. diff --git a/_develop/zero_to_dapp_4.md b/_develop/zero_to_dapp_4.md index 83dc8ac1..773602ca 100644 --- a/_develop/zero_to_dapp_4.md +++ b/_develop/zero_to_dapp_4.md @@ -99,7 +99,7 @@ To add an app, do the following: Blockchain - Leave this as is/ + Leave this as is. Storage diff --git a/_includes/create_id.md b/_includes/create_id.md index 679a6aae..b43236fc 100644 --- a/_includes/create_id.md +++ b/_includes/create_id.md @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ To create an initial Blockstack ID, do the following: 2. Enter an email address and press **Next**. - The application prompts you to enter a password. Blockstack users this + The application prompts you to enter a password. Blockstack uses this password to encrypt your recovery code. You must record and save this initial password. diff --git a/_includes/payout-appmining.md b/_includes/payout-appmining.md index e55d407d..fe0b3f4a 100644 --- a/_includes/payout-appmining.md +++ b/_includes/payout-appmining.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -For each app mining cohort, there is determined a “pot” of total earnings that will +For each app mining cohort, there is a determined “pot” of total earnings that will get paid to apps. For the Alpha run, Blockstack paid a total of $25,000 USD. Starting in December 2018, Blockstack will pay $100,000 USD and the awards will be paid out in Bitcoin. diff --git a/_includes/signature_fund.md b/_includes/signature_fund.md index 8f4270ba..6624b58e 100644 --- a/_includes/signature_fund.md +++ b/_includes/signature_fund.md @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ products and a set of judges determine who wins the prize for the best product. In addition to the bounty program, Blockstack supports an application mining program. This is an early stage program for developers. In this program, application developers register their application on App.co. Then, each month, -application developers get paid each month depending on their application +application developers get paid depending on their application quality ranking. The ranking is determined by a set of application reviewers. Application mining differs from the venture model or the app studio model