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-Blockstack Connect is a JavaScript library for integrating your application with Stacks v2. With Connect, you get some big benefits:
+Blockstack Connect is a JavaScript library for integrating Blockstack authentication and smart contracts into your app.
 
-- Pre-built UI to introduce your users to Blockstack, before they authenticate
-- Integration with our new authenticator
-- Ability to interact with the Stacks 2.0 blockchain, with support for smart contracts and other transactions.
+The library empowers you to:
 
-## Demo
+- Register new users with a pre-built onboarding flow that quickly educates them as to the privacy benefits of using your app with Blockstack and provisions a "Secret Key" that secures their identity and data against the Stacks blockchain.
+- Authenticate users when they return to your app using that same Secret Key.
+- Prompt users to sign transactions with smart contracts as written in Clarity and published to the Stacks blockchain.
 
-To get a test feel for the user experience of using Connect, you can use [Banter](https://banter.pub).
+## See it in action
 
-## How does this compare to `blockstack.js`?
+Here's what it looks like to register new users into an app with Blockstack Connect:
+
+**insert video**
+
+As you can see, you simply need to add a "Get started" option to your app homepage and the library will display an introductory modal in the context of your app that explains the privacy benefits of using Blockstack and prepares users to receive a Secret Key instead of entering a traditional email and password.
+
+The modal then triggers a popup in which Blockstack PBC's authenticator generates a 12-word mnemonic Secret Key and instructs the user to save it securely. The authenticator subsequently requests a username from the user, which will be used to identify them in your app and manage their various accounts, before routing them back to your app to start using it.
+
+This entire onboarding flow has been designed and tested to optimize the speed in which your new users start using your app with the prerequisite knowledge and credentials. 
+
+Here's what users see when returning to an app to sign back in:
+
+**insert video**
+
+As you can see, you simply need to add a "Sign in" option to your homepage. The library will trigger a popup in which the authenticator prompts users to simply enter their Secret Key at which point they can resume using your app.
 
-Although [`blockstack.js`](https://github.com/blockstack/blockstack.js) exposes everything you need to handle authentication with Blockstack, there is still the hard problem of getting users familiar with the the paradigm of authentication that is privacy-first and self-sovereign. Many apps implement their own dialogues before authentication, which explain what Blockstack is and why they use it.
+At whichever point after a user has authenticated to your app, you can trigger the authenticator in a popup once more for them to a sign a transaction against any smart contract you or others have published to the Stacks blockchain.
+
+**insert screenshot**
+
+Note how this UI indicates "Testing mode" since transaction signing functionality is currently in beta and designed primarily with developers in mind. However, any Blockstack user who authenticates to your app can use it.
+
+## Try it out
+
+Our test app [Banter](https://banter.pub) is built with Blockstack Connect. Select "Get Started" to experience the standardized onboarding flow available to all apps that integrate this library.
+
+Separately, you can use the [Blockstack Testnet Demo](https://authenticator-demo.netlify.app/) not only to experience registration and sign in but transaction signing as well.
+
+## How does this compare to `blockstack.js`?
 
-`@blockstack/connect` provides developers with a plug-and-play API that is simple to use, and provides great, out-of-the-box education that end-users can understand.
+Although [`blockstack.js`](https://github.com/blockstack/blockstack.js) can also be used to authenticate users, it implements the deprecated [Blockstack Browser](https://browser.blockstack.org/) and lacks any pre-built onboarding UI that educates users as to how your app is more secure for having implemented Blockstack. As such, we advise that you use `blockstack.js` for all other functionality apart from authentication, such as saving and retrieving user data with Gaia.
 
-## How can this be used?
+## Start building with Blockstack Connect
 
 Head over to the [Guide to Connect](get-started.html) for installation steps and usage guidelines.