Onboarding mandatory analytics, save seed subtitle, social tooltips

static/i18n/en/onboarding.yml

@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ selectDevice:
     title: Ledger Blue
 selectPIN:
   disclaimer:
-    note1: 'Choose your own PIN code: this code will unlock your device.' # dotted line should be in red. Increase size of the hand (+50%?)
+    note1: 'Choose your own PIN code, this code will unlock your device.' # dotted line should be in red. Increase size of the hand (+50%?)
     note2: An 8-digit PIN code offers an optimum level of security.
     note3: Never use a device supplied with a PIN code or a 24-word recovery phrase.
   initialize:
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ selectPIN:
       nano:
         step1: Connect the Ledger Nano S to your computer.
         step2: Press both buttons simultaneously as instructed on the screen.
-        step3: Press the right button to select <1><0>Configure as new device?</0></1>
+        step3: 'Press the right button to select <1><0>Configure as new device?</0></1>.'
         step4: 'Choose a PIN code between 4 and 8 digits long, followed by the checkmark (✓).'
       blue:
         step1: Connect the Ledger Blue to your computer.
@@ -56,8 +56,8 @@ selectPIN:
       nano:
         step1: Connect the Ledger Nano S to your computer.
         step2: Press both buttons simultaneously as instructed on the screen.
-        step3: Press the left button to cancel <1><0>Initialize as new device?</0></1> Press the right button to select <3><0>Restore configuration?</0></3>
+        step3: 'Press the left button to cancel <1><0>Initialize as new device?</0></1>. Then press the right button to select <3><0>Restore configuration?</0></3>'
-        step4: 'Choose a PIN code between 4 and 8 digits long followed by the checkmark (✓).'
+        step4: 'Choose a PIN code between 4 and 8 digits , followed by the checkmark (✓).'
       blue:
         step1: Connect the Ledger Blue to your computer.
         step2: Tap on <1><0>Restore configuration</0></1>.
@@ -65,7 +65,9 @@ selectPIN:
 writeSeed:
   initialize:
     title: Save your recovery phrase
-    desc: Your device will generate a recovery phrase of 24 words, displayed only once.
+    desc: Your device will generate a 24-word recovery phrase to back up your private keys
+    #Save the 24-word recovery phrase on your device to back up your private keys
+        # Your device will generate a 24-word recovery phrase to back up your private keys
     nano:
       step1: 'Copy the word displayed below <1><0>Word #1</0></1> in position 1 on a blank Recovery sheet.'
       step2: 'Press the right button to display <1><0>Word #2</0></1> and repeat the process until all 24 words are copied on the Recovery sheet.' #<italic>Recovery sheet</italic>
@@ -93,8 +95,8 @@ writeSeed:
     note4: Never use a device supplied with a recovery phrase or a PIN code.
 genuineCheck:
   title: Security checklist
-  descNano: Before getting started, please confirm
+  descNano: Before continuing, please complete the security checklist
-  descBlue: Before getting started, please confirm
+  descBlue: Before continuing, please complete the security checklist
   descRestore: Before getting started, please confirm
   step1:
     title: Did you choose your PIN code by yourself?
@@ -108,11 +110,11 @@ genuineCheck:
     contactSupport: Contact us
   errorPage:
     ledgerNano:
-      title: Oops, your device does not seem genuine...
+      title: Oops, something went wrong...
         #PIN: Didn't choose your own PIN code?
         #recoveryPhrase: Didn't save your own recovery phrase?
         #Genuine: Oops, your device does not seem genuine...
-      desc: Your device did not pass the authenticity test required to connect to Ledger’s secure server. Please contact Ledger Support to get assistance.
+      desc: Go back to the security checklist or request Ledger Support assistance
         #PIN: Never use a device supplied with a PIN code. If your device was provided with a PIN code, please contact us.
         #recoveryPhrase: Only save a recovery phrase that is displayed on your device. Please contact us in case of doubt. Otherwise, go back to the security checklist.
         #Genuine: Your device did not pass the authenticity test required to connect to Ledger’s secure server. Please contact Ledger Support to get assistance.
@@ -138,7 +140,14 @@ analytics:
   sentryLogs:
     title: Report bugs
     desc: Automatically send reports to help Ledger fix bugs
+  # mandatoryContextual:
+    # title: Technical data
+    # desc: Ledger will automatically collect technical information to help improve user experience. This information is fully anonymized.
 finish:
   title: Your device is ready!
   desc: Proceed to your portfolio and start adding your accounts...
   openAppButton: Open Ledger Live
+  #tooltip:
+    # twitter: Twitter
+    # github: GitHub
+    # reddit: Reddit