From 52dc9aec01767600494daf4a7c7df5596eb3ca65 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Alexander Tseung Date: Mon, 15 Dec 2014 23:43:26 -0800 Subject: [PATCH] Update tutorial.md for grammatical changes Update tutorial.md to improve grammatical parallelism in features list. Also added periods to follow first item's syntax. BEFORE: "Live updates: as other users comment we'll pop them into the comment view in real time" AFTER: "Live updates: other users' comments are popped into the comment view in real time." BEFORE: "Markdown formatting: users can use Markdown to format their text" AFTER: "Markdown formatting: users can use Markdown to format their text." --- docs/tutorial.md | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/docs/tutorial.md b/docs/tutorial.md index c40389dc..b903cc79 100644 --- a/docs/tutorial.md +++ b/docs/tutorial.md @@ -16,8 +16,8 @@ We'll provide: It'll also have a few neat features: * **Optimistic commenting:** comments appear in the list before they're saved on the server so it feels fast. -* **Live updates:** as other users comment we'll pop them into the comment view in real time -* **Markdown formatting:** users can use Markdown to format their text +* **Live updates:** other users' comments are popped into the comment view in real time. +* **Markdown formatting:** users can use Markdown to format their text. ### Want to skip all this and just see the source?