Adding in Patricks comments (#132)

Signed-off-by: Mary Anthony <mary@blockstack.com>

_develop/mining_intro.md

@@ -17,11 +17,12 @@ This section explains App Mining, a program for developers. For Blockstack, App
 ## How apps are reviewed
 
 Blockstack worked with a team of Ph.D. game theorist and economists from
-Princeton and NYU to put together a ranking algorithm which is fair and
+Princeton and NYU to put together a [ranking
-resistant to abuse. Blockstack partnered with two different third-party
+algorithm](https://blog.blockstack.org/app-mining-game-theory-algorithm-design/)
-reviewers, Product Hunt and Democracy.earth. These reviewers are independent,
+which is fair and resistant to abuse. Blockstack uses three third-party
-and generally rely on their own proprietary data and insights to generate
+reviewers, Product Hunt, TryMyUI, and Democracy.earth. These reviewers are
-rankings.
+independent, and generally rely on their own proprietary data and insights to
+generate rankings.
 
 ### Product Hunt
 
@@ -52,16 +53,17 @@ built a platform that anyone can use to gather votes in a trust-less,
 decentralized way.
 
 Democracy Earth has built a platform for Stacks token holders to vote on how
-apps should be ranked. Each token holder gets a certain number of votes, and
+apps should be ranked. Each token holder gets a 1000 votes, and they can
-they can distribute those votes however they want. It’s possible to give all of
+distribute those votes however they want. It’s possible to give all of your
-your votes to a single app, and you can also “downvote” an app with one of your
+votes to a single app, and you can also “downvote” an app with one of your
 votes.
 
 After a voting period, each app has a certain amount of upvotes and downvotes.
-First, Blockstack calculates the percentage of total votes that are upvotes. If
+First, Democracy Earth calculates the percentage of total votes that are
-you got 90 upvotes and 10 downvotes, you’d get a “likability score” of 90.
+upvotes. If an app receives 90 upvotes and 10 downvotes, the resulting
-Secondly, Blockstack calculates a “traction score”, which ranks how many total
+“likability score” is 90. Secondly, Democracy Earth calculates a “traction
-votes (including downvotes) an app received, relative to other apps.
+score”, which ranks how many total votes (including downvotes) an app received,
+relative to other apps.
 
 
 ### TryMyUI

_includes/intro-appmining.md

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 Traditionally the term _mining_ in cryptocurrency refers to the process of
 contributing compute resources to the network and earning a reward. On the
 Blockstack network, however, instead of just mining through computation,
-developers can mine by contributing apps to the ecosystem and making
+developers also can mine by contributing apps to the ecosystem and making
 applications the community wants.
 
 ![](images/mining-image.png)
@@ -9,5 +9,5 @@ applications the community wants.
 Founders that build apps using Blockstack developer tools like Blockstack Auth
 get paid each month, in amounts proportional to that month’s app quality
 ranking. Blockstack PBC, in cooperation with App.co, currently administers the
-payouts. A set of independent _App reviewers_ determines the monthly ranking
+payouts. A set of independent _app reviewers_ determines the monthly ranking
 during the pilot phase.

_includes/payout-appmining.md

@@ -1,6 +1,8 @@
-For each App Mining cohort, there is a determined “pot” of total earnings that will
+For each App Mining cohort, there is a determined “pot” of total earnings that
-get paid to apps. For the Alpha run, Blockstack paid a total of $25,000 USD. Starting in
+will get paid to apps. For the Alpha run, Blockstack paid a total of $25,000
-December 2018, Blockstack will pay $100,000 USD and the awards will be paid out in Bitcoin.
+USD. For the Alpha run, App Mining paid a total of $25,000 USD. However, in
+December 2018, App Mining began paying $100,000 USD  each month, with earnings
+paid out in Bitcoin.
 
 The top app gets paid 20% of the total pot. So, for a pot of $100k, the top app
 receives $20,000 USD. The next app gets paid 20% of the remaining pot. The